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Lets Watch the City Burn by JaystarNOW

:iconk9kitty:
well the fire dosent look right at all! and his face is varry long. his nose isent where i should be. and it looks like its raining confedy!windows dont look like that on sky scrapers i do believe that there would be more bildings. the paws look like there almost about to brake and you should try to finde a new way to draw back legs. the tail should be slightly curlyer unless this is one pecific cat that has a scinny wolf tail. im sorry for all the crittisism but i still like it!!!! i love the "lets wach the city burn" thing that is cool! ^^
i hope this helps ^^
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:iconnightiights:
nightIights Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree with the person below , you are being too harsh . For me too , I would be furious if you gave critique like this on my artwork .
It's good how you said something nice about it at the end , but your spelling errors and bad manner of expressing your opinion blurs it out .
I don't know how jaystar can think this critique is fair , and for that point I respect her .
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:iconk9kitty:
k9kitty Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
i know im a bad speller X3 i dident mean to be harsh tho. i was trying to give her pointers. but i respect that you feel as if it was mean. at first i dident know if i should have sent it im sorry if you think i sound mean
:'(
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:iconzebtehzebra:
ZebtehZebra Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
no affence but this is a little harsh, like really harsh. I would be verybmad if you said this to me.
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:iconk9kitty:
k9kitty Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
oh...well i said sorry / : (
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